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  • haterzloveme

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    I really like it XD
    February 13th, 2013 at 08:05pm
  • dfident

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    The rhyme scheme is perfect! well done. It is a little short, but I think what was needed to be said was said and that it has a powerful impact upon the reader! Please keep writing, and if you wish, read my poems and give some constructive criticism. I love all the feedback I can get. :) But well done, you have quite the talent. :)
    February 13th, 2013 at 06:55pm
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