Absence : My First Published Poem - Comments

This was beautifully written. I think we can all relate to that feeling of having somebody that we could be perfect with. What I really liked about this poem is that you captured the idea in such a small size that it was simple and beautiful. No wonder why it was published!

i love this, beautifully written :) I also wanna say thank you for your comments on one of my poems, they made my day and really nice :) .xags

It doesn't matter that it's short, it's powerful. You create very vivid (did I spell that right?) and powerful images and feelings with your word choice.
It's fantastic! Keep it up!

Amazing. I love it.
That is all. <33

Once again, a gorgeous poem that speaks truth to the reader. Lovely!

Ahhhh! I love this poem!!!! I can relate to it so well! I'm very glad you commented on my writing! You are an amazing writer! :) keep up the awesome work!

wow this is good I can totally picture this in my head and I completely understand what you are saying

I MADE THIS A SONG!!!!!

This is really good :)x x

I really liked this! It was short, but sweet and thats what I enjoyed. :) Also, it explains a relationship I had almost exactly. Nice job.