March 18th, 2013 at 11:13pm
@ Phoenix93
No problem! It was beautiful.
Puzzle Pieces of the Heart - Comments
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March 18th, 2013 at 09:19pm
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As always, an amazing poem. You truly have a talent, as I've told you so many times before. This person you always write about, she's got to be someone special. Lucky girl.March 18th, 2013 at 07:09am
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@ PikaChick
Awesome, thanks! I don't really try too hard to make my writing fit into any specific forms. I just write. It's easier that way, and I can just get my messages across without having to redo the poem, and modify it here and there. Still, I'm glad that you liked it!March 18th, 2013 at 05:50am -
it's part Shakespearean sonnet. The only thing you are missing is iambic pentameter. :)March 18th, 2013 at 03:00am
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@ writingismypassion23
lol wow. Thanks so much for your support. It means a lot that someone who knows nothing about me is that impressed with my writing. I'll be sure to read your stuff and let you know what I think. Thanks again!!March 18th, 2013 at 12:37am -
@ PikaChick
Honestly, I can't tell you. I don't actually know a whole lot about poetry. I just sit down and write what I feel in a way that's easy to express myself. And this form is the easiest way I can do that.... Whatever form this is....March 18th, 2013 at 12:36am -
It was really nice. The imagery was beautiful. Is it in iambic pentameter?March 16th, 2013 at 01:28pm
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I love this, it is amazing. I smiled while reading this and my heart dropped at the same time. This poem is perfection to me!!March 16th, 2013 at 01:26pm
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WOW! wowwwww. You are so talented! Your poem is original, voiced, quaint, and just down right beautiful. Your work is to perfection and I without a doubt subscribed AND recommend! You have a lot of talent and I absolutely love this poem. I actually adore it :D I would honestly die of happiness if you read my poems and reviewed them, only if you want to of course :D Anyways, a job well done!!
God Bless!March 16th, 2013 at 11:52am
She is special. I just wish I was the lucky one.