The Farmer - Comments

loooooove it :3

thanks for the input! :D I tweaked it to make it a little more clear, too

I enjoyed reading the beginning of the poem which was written in the plant's point of view. It was strong and mesmerizing at the same time which I adore!

I was somewhat confused with the last line: And remember your plant you killed that's regrown. It was upsetting because I was waiting for the ending which was always the best part.

Maybe try rephrasing the last line. I understood the meaning of it but it should be rephrased shorter.