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@ Ayesha C
Thanks !

September 2nd, 2013 at 01:46am
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heyyyyyyy i like this! It has a very easy flow and rhyme scheme and its kinda sad. I could relate to it which is probably why i liked it. One error i noticed; you missed out 'for' when you wrote 'I care you'. But thats all. Nice Job!

September 2nd, 2013 at 01:45am

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