Steel Voices. - Comments

@ Living Waters
Thanks...couldn't do it without your kind words :)

Hey my friend! look at you, winning awards and stuff! I told you that you were a great poet, way to get recognition. Proud of you man:)

@ MrBlackwaterPark
Aw, shucks<3

@ Deus Ex Machina
You're beautiful!! Jk...double jk. Thanks. Its my intent to lure everyone in :)

I'm not a big poetry fan but this is beautiful.

@ MrBlackwaterPark
Thank you very much.

@ XXXataktoulaXXX
Thank you!!! Congrats on being runner-up :)

Congratz for winning in the contest. This was by far a very good poem. Well done!

@ Airi.
Glad you enjoyed it. REALLY glad that there was such a contest in existence. It's hard finding poem contests on Mibba nowadays :/ Thanks for reading and all the accolades...really made me feel great.

@ psychotic secrets;
Thanks for all the accolades...I was glad to enter :)

Hello! I'm actually a judge from Mibba Writing Contest: Poetic Connections.

First off, I got to say I very much enjoyed this poem. There was something about the tone and the words chosen that give the whole thing zings (I don't think that is a word) like a spark. It made the poem stand out and made it very entertaining. Like I said, the word choice is superb, the imagery really helped with overall feel of the whole poem. Which to me, is actually a story.

Actually, I think you did a great job for the contest. I can obviously see it is about a certain character and I believe it fits quite well. Not only that but I just really do love how you wrote this piece. It gives chills down my spine and the repeated lines are just wonderful. So this was just excellent!

Hey there! I'm here as a judge for the Magazine's Poetic Connections contest.

Your poem is very captivating, I must say. I absolutely love the intense imagery that you used in the poem. It gave the poem a very haunting and mysterious feeling to it, which is always something that has drawn me into things. owo One thing that I've always loved to read when it comes to poetry is when the poems use wording that isn't very straightforward. I like poets who can express what they want to say with clever wordplay. This probably isn't making any sense, I'm sorry. ^^' I'm not entirely sure how to describe it but what I can tell you is that you hit it pretty spot on. ovo

For I am the whisper that plants love in her ear
This was my absolutely favorite line in the poem. I think it's just a very beautiful line and the wordplay used in it is excellent.

You did an excellent job of luring the reader in with your poems. Your words are very intense that they can leave a reader wanting to continue to the next line until the end of the poem. It's hard to break interest when reading your poem, which is a great thing for anyone to be able to accomplish!

Overall, you did really good on the poem. I was really impressed with it.

@ Living Waters
Can't forget. You really helped to push me and continue writing :) Thanks again...the new name is better than the old imo :)

BlackWater! How's it goin man? I don't know if you remember me but I used to have another account on here by the name of "FloatingInThePast". I left the site for a while but decided to return and got a new account.

Anyway, I saw your name and remembered you. I always liked your poems, they have intense imagery and haunting lyrics. This poem is no exception, another exceptional job. I can identify with this dark state of lust and fantasy, I think most people can.