Ink - Comments

This is awesome. I love how bluntly you tell us what we should by now already know "Cause they won't notice the world's fucked up." Everything about this is direct and leaves no headway for second guessing, you tell it like it is and I love it.

I thoroughly enjoyed this. Very here-and-now and unapologetically straight forward.

The greatest way to record accurate history is through poems and other creative works, so not only does this wonderfully encompass a negative aspect of the human experience, it also addresses the issue. And if that isn't the coolest thing I don't know what is.

It was a very good poem, I enjoyed it and am eager to read more!