Confrontation - Comments

@ cinnaminion.

@ Living Waters

Thank you both very much for the comments. And I made the the finality of it like that simply because I don't like just saying what I mean all the time. I kinda wanted a mysterious feel. Haha but I appreciate it very much!

On the contrary to the comment before me, I think the lack of finality is what makes it interesting because it lets the reader wonder. I don't know why, but your style reminds me of Holden Caulfield in the Catcher in the Rye. Anyway, good job. :)

I think your poem is quite interesting. I love your ingenuity, but your poem lacked a sense of finality. Who is he really staring at? that point remains unclear. Other then that, I think you have a good skill for free-verse