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  • Michael Westen

    Michael Westen (450)

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    I don't think this is meant to feel crushing, but it's leaving me feeling like the walls are closing in, and I'm sad about it.

    The last stanza, it takes my breath away to be honest.

    You wrote this so wonderfully. It's fantastic.
    January 18th, 2015 at 02:41am
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