This is quite reversing but its still flowy as it should be. Well done on that.
The subject you picked to write about is one many can relate to. Dreaming someone and them dreaming about you with the thought you are lurking in their dreams. This poem shows how much the narrator wants to make the other person believe in his own beauty while showing their love for them. Really nice!
This is quite reversing but its still flowy as it should be. Well done on that.
The subject you picked to write about is one many can relate to. Dreaming someone and them dreaming about you with the thought you are lurking in their dreams. This poem shows how much the narrator wants to make the other person believe in his own beauty while showing their love for them. Really nice!
-Maria. :)