Paper People - Comments

tung twister but awsome!!

This was a bit of a workout for the little narrator voice in my brain at 20 to 4 in the morning. xD But I was pulled in by the rhythm and the imagery within the first couple of lines. This is a cleverly worded poem, but it's also a lot of powerful truths that everyone should read. :) I loved it.

This is absolutely amazing! I love it!