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@EvilDeadMFM thank you for the feedback, it is very much appreciated. I'm glad you liked it :)

November 1st, 2015 at 02:56pm
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November 1st, 2015 at 02:34pm
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I really liked this. Its very visual and I felt that the raw emotion of the boy was embedded within each word. I felt emotional as I read this. Good job!

November 1st, 2015 at 02:33pm

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