This entire thing is a work of art! First stanza itself made my thoughts go wild. I really love the way you worded this, “age-old butter, covered in flies” because it’s like power in a nutshell. It’s great! I like that the audience is playing around with what’s really going on here; it’s mysterious and alluring. Your writing is majestic because every line is it’s own show. Great piece!
July 4th, 2016 at 06:23am