That's great R. When i read it the sky outside seemed to get darker. It was that fucking amazing
April 13th, 2009 at 09:25pm
Heaven Help Us - Comments
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o_O UH-MAY-ZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!February 19th, 2009 at 06:53am
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oh.
my.
fucking.
god.
THAT WAS EFFIN AMAZING!
love the sequence and very well-written :DSeptember 28th, 2008 at 03:29pm -
That peom flowed together so amazingly!September 21st, 2008 at 07:30pm
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That's such an amazing poem! I wish I had skills and could make things rhyme.July 25th, 2008 at 01:17am
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omg.
That was fucking amazing!!!
I LOVE IT!!!
*starts clapping*
*is getting stared at by my mom*
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Wow. You're a REALLY good poet. I could feel a lot of emotion when I read it. And it rhymes, yet the rhyme doesn't feel forced, like you're just saying anything just to rhyme. It's a great poem and I love it! Nice rhythm, too. <33 Awesome.June 25th, 2008 at 09:51pm
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aww, man, thats a loveley poem!!!
soo well written <3June 25th, 2008 at 09:10pm -
wow! that's like a really good poem. i wish i could write like that!June 25th, 2008 at 03:47pm
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This is so... great LIke u don't understand its really good lolz
WhisperedKissesJune 25th, 2008 at 05:49am -
Gods, that's GORGEOUS.June 25th, 2008 at 05:15am
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i love it.June 25th, 2008 at 03:20am
