Am I Still Pretty? - Comments

  • Hemingway

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    Simply spectacular. :)
    April 30th, 2009 at 07:20pm
  • WTFAmber?

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    i luvd it! heh i suck at poems but ppl say there good.....liars
    April 27th, 2009 at 04:49am
  • Miss.Bryant

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    You know what you should do? Try to get this published like in a book or something =D It is really good.
    November 26th, 2008 at 12:05am
  • Friday Night

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    this is beautiful
    you're an amazing writer :) xoxo
    October 22nd, 2008 at 12:28am
  • ThexVampiresxKiss

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    This is beautiful. I don't know why you say you aren't a good writer.
    October 17th, 2008 at 03:32am
  • tron

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    I like this, it has a very conversation-like tone. The first and third stanzas are really good, to be honest though, the ending seems a bit weak.
    October 16th, 2008 at 05:27am
  • frivolity

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    this reminds me of a girl i once knew. she was a great friend to me. r.i.p. amiya
    October 16th, 2008 at 02:58am
  • Little-C

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    This is kinda speaking how I feel...I've just been really down lately...I have just inner scars that are ripping me in side...so this poem is really great to read. You are a very beautiful person! :D
    October 14th, 2008 at 11:54pm
  • KeepThePeace

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    i reeeeeeeeeeeeealllyyyy reeeeeeeeaaalllllly like it dude((:
    its amazing!
    September 29th, 2008 at 02:12am
  • Crazy Beautiful

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    I really really like it!!!! good job!!!!!!!
    September 23rd, 2008 at 12:34am
  • Be_Not_Seen

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    I loved it!
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    VERY PRETTIFUL!
    September 5th, 2008 at 02:45am
  • Are.We.Even.Now?

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    that's freakin' awesome
    September 3rd, 2008 at 04:57am
  • turkey_balls

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    that was great...very pretty
    August 27th, 2008 at 09:08pm
  • ashtastetherainbow

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    Wow. This took my breath away. I can't really point out just one part I like, because I like so many of the stanzas. Really, this was awesome. The rhyming just seemed so natural. <3
    August 24th, 2008 at 03:45am
  • Bee.Vee

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    Wow.That.Captured.My.Eyes.As.Well.As.My.Heart.
    Check.Out.Some.Of.My.Poems
    August 24th, 2008 at 01:29am