Another really good piece of poetry. I enjoyed it very much. "The countless twists and the many turns." was a great line.
December 24th, 2008 at 03:05am
It Doesn't Hurt. - Comments
-
-
very nice. i like the rhyming, and how it flowsOctober 12th, 2008 at 10:48pm
-
Wow
this is an awesome poem,
Really good,
XXXXAugust 28th, 2008 at 10:04pm -
Wow,
I just love the way you make the poem work,
and how it shows your feelings,
and how the readers can easily relate to it.August 28th, 2008 at 08:52pm
