Is there a God? - Comments

  • vic-the-bear

    vic-the-bear (100)

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    I like this poem a lot. I think it would be really cool if you finished it by putting as many happy things that point to yes as you did sad things that point to no; like maybe the birth of a child after the funeral one. I'm not pushing either answer, I just think it would be cool and kind of balanced.
    October 26th, 2008 at 10:49pm
  • silent.music

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    I adore this poem.
    It's so deep and questioning. I, personally, don't believe there's a God, but this is such a good poem asking whether there really is a good.
    Love it.
    October 24th, 2008 at 11:28pm