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CyanideandHappiness
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Its a good poem.
Really.
But you should separate the verses, instead of writing them in one whole sentence.
I still liked it, though, of course!
May 26th, 2007 at 03:01am
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Its a good poem.
Really.
But you should separate the verses, instead of writing them in one whole sentence.
I still liked it, though, of course!