April 10th, 2009 at 05:38pm
This poem is beautiful, but SO SAD!
Particularly the last line....
Amazing writing though, so don't stop!
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April 8th, 2009 at 05:46pm
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This poem is completely and utterly AMAZING!
I love it!!!!!!! :]
You write really good poems, never stop! Promise me that, okay?
And don't get mad at me for picking this poem for 3rd place and not 2nd or 1st. At least you won something. :]]]April 8th, 2009 at 05:42am -
awww,, that''s so cute ((in a sad way)),, i loved it
Sad && Sweet (:December 2nd, 2008 at 06:16pm -
but it was goodNovember 26th, 2008 at 04:58am
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Damnit sammeh your gonna make me fucking cry!November 26th, 2008 at 04:57am
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Seemingly morbid and amazing at the same time.
I like it(:
P.s, sorry for the random comment :ShiftyNovember 20th, 2008 at 10:23pm -
That was really good!
So much emotion, it was really sad.
But it was amazing.
Keep it up :]November 16th, 2008 at 09:39pm -
aww that's so sad and really good... i have written a couple poems like this, not exactly like this... they're called Dad? and My Daddy's Little Girl if you would like to take a lookNovember 16th, 2008 at 09:21pm
It makes me want to cry.