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  • last time

    last time (100)

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    Interesting. The structure fits this piece which adds an element of...suspense. Despite knowing about the "it's you" part, someone can turn it around into creating a hero or villain depending on the readers' interpretation. I do like how it ends.
    December 1st, 2008 at 09:09pm
  • frisysinger

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    me???
    December 1st, 2008 at 08:10pm