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  • rejected-one

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    You shaped it so very well ^+
    June 30th, 2007 at 05:20pm
  • likely lads

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    Once again, I have to comment on your use of metaphores. Fabulous.

    This is better with the capitalization, too, and I like that. I like your word choice, and I like the length.

    I loved it^^
    June 28th, 2007 at 05:41am
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