Reminiscent Romeo and Juliet

At first when I saw you,
I knew that I could never-
Love anyone else but you.
Then I saw you lying there.
Looking so beautifully-
Your eyes were set to close,
And your heart wasn't beating,
I knew that you were no more.
Yet I had to have you-
All to myself,
I reached across your corpse,
Grabbed the gun and knife,
Pulled the trigger, but there came no bang.
I started toward my neck,
Knife in shaking hand,
About ready to carve-
When a tiny shimmer caught my eye.
But this drop of water wasn't mine,
For it rested on your cheek,
This lovely surprise was too late,
I had already cut too deep.
The blood started pouring-
While your tears started swelling,
And all I could feel was joy-
I knew you were still living.

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