Black and White and Red All Over Re-Write

My world shatters
It falls to the floor
Becoming shapeless pieces
I can’t place back together

There’s no way out
No way to hide
And my skin collides
With the sharpness of the knives

Small slices and slashes
Make such large
Bloody gashes
But those little scratches
Can make me feel sane

And though I am bleeding,
My heart slows in beating
I cannot resist
The sensation of pain

Anything to feel alive
Anything to feel
Aside from fear
The hurt from lies
The wonder if it’s worth hanging on

I hear no sound
Aside from the beating
The breathing
Slowing and stopping
It’s all gone dark and cold
Enveloped in darkness
The world goes from black to red

Fading and falling
Falling further away
And before I reach the ground
Right from the start
I was only living
Because of my beating heart
I realize
As the last breath leaves

Author's Note: As you can see a lot of lines from the first one are still here ... tell me which one you like more =) And sorry about the stanzas >.> I'll fix it up when the chance is given =)