About Your Life

Out of place
With no trace
Falling back
Into the sack
They leave with no time
Of the crime
There is no turning back
That indeed life is crack
Of a twist
From the wrist
Pages turning
Bridges burning
While the world is spinning
As the book is thinning
No time to rest
To fulfill the test
That burns through the chest
Leaves are swirling
People are twirling
Tip-toeing
As life stops flowing
The wind isn’t blowing
Did it mean any thing
That people will be forever asking
Of a legend for everlasting
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This has been a break through for me because I wasn't able to write in over a year til now. I got my inspiration from the movie August Rush. Please tell me what you truly think about this. This piece is very differently from anything I have written before. Thank You.