Mistake

Her heart thumping in her chest,
her eyes stinging with regret.
Her head pounding like a drum,
she stood still.
In the silence,
in the confusion,
in the awkwardness,
in the despair.
Of her mistake.
♠ ♠ ♠
So there was a certain format we had to do this in, and here it is if you're interested:

Absolute phrase
Absolute phrase
Absolute phrase
Independent Clause
Prepositional Phrase
Prepositional Phrase
Prepositional Phrase
Prepositional Phrase
Prepositional Phrase

So........yeah. Hope you liked it!!!!!!! :) :D :P

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