Valentine's Day Poem

Author's Note: This is a poem I wrote for my boyfriend for Valentine's Day, but before I give it to him, I want to see what other people think of it, so let me know what you think.

My favorite memory of us
Is when we were sitting on the docks
We were having so much fun
We didn’t pay attention to the clocks
We listened to the birds chirping
As the water beneath us swirled
It’s times like those that make me feel
Like the luckiest girl in the world
We haven’t been together very long,
But the connection between us is strong
I never want to lose you, or let you go,
So tell me if you love me, let me know
I guess what I’m trying to say,
Is happy Valentine’s Day!