deviant mystery

Omnious moon settles in over the sun...setting the roof top aglow silver streaks shadowed behind his head.Eyes staring down intently small black blobs move robotically in a swarm like ants.Down below he spots something interesting with blonde hair for some reason she looks up as if connected by some sacred bond they held that only they knew.Tundra Boolix lived in the outskirts of Moscow every turn was an adventure for him.Of course no matter his age he was determine to figure out the impossible.That mainly has something to do with the fact that his childhood is a blur...he has no recongition of anything 16years old and younger.But that he has a mark of a half moon with a blue star above the peak on the left side of his chest.And he always has dreams of this unknown figure a girl same age as him you could never make out her whole image but just the main outline of her.She had faint green eyes that held a key to a mystery that he himself didnt even knew it was possible to solve.Gray clouds slowly move across the full moon covering the glow that once stung his wolf-like golden eyes.Wincing he figured he should head home.Lowly his head swung beside his shoulders walking grudgingly.
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Please be gentle this is my first story that i ever wrote for a boy but i do need opinions.
Heres the plot becuz i kno that its kinda confusing....Its a shadowkissed story..based off of one of my favorite books if u dont kno what it means..Its when u save a life and the person that u healed is always bonded by you and they leave their mark...But anyways u will kno the rest later....here u are boogey hope u like it...comments r <3