worst and best of situations

You want to kiss this girl ghost
While her lips are so moist
It's cold now- what's that?
Oh, but don't you hate God in these situations?
Not helping pain enough.
She whispered to him she screamed to him
The hospital, a reeking place where they put his love to rest
Sick inside, Patience was her first name
This song based on her critical condition
Prescribed pills, was chemo a mistake?
The worst time to take pills
She told him she would love him in afterlife
So when she couldn't stop the beeping sound
From that I,V. that she'd fight
They offered her help but she won't take it.
"I'm gone now, Life's closed the curtain"
He won't let it happen
She won't leave
He hates all his misfortune
Hair falling out, beads of sweat cross her face
The best time to take pills
She'd find him in her afterlife
He is so alone in this world
And she can't fix it this time
Because she dies, she dies
And he dies.
But only inside.

This song is actually inspired by a story in my head as well as a panic! song.
If you read it, Tell me if i should write a story on mibba about it? Thanks if you do.
The characters names are Marcus and Patience =D