Life Isn't Fair

She falls to her knees and looks up at the sky,
slowly but surely, a tear falls from her eye.
She searches for what she needs with no success.
And her will to fight is becoming less and less.
She cries in the night as she looks up at the stars.
The pain has become overwhelming, like a falem in her heart.
She could make an ocean from the tears she's cried.
A tear for everytime he lied.
As the sound of her cries fill the air,
It proves to everyone that life isn't fair.
Life is like an endless mountain climb,
you'll never reach the top before you run out of time.
But while climbing this mountain, it's easy to let yourself fall.
All we can do is hope God hears our call,
she tries, but she feels as if she's talking to thin air.
She wonders if her life could be spared.
She gives up and all you hear is her body hit the ground.
Otherwise, there is no sound.
No more crying,
No more trying,
No pain, absolutly none.
Her time here is done.
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I think this is possibly the best poem I've ever written...would do you guys think ?