Rain of Needles

The clouds darken, its getting worse
you were my everything; my universe
And as these days feel like months passing by
i look up at the darkening sky...
i begin to cry...

Oh rain fall down like needles
and replace this uncontrollable pain.
There is no warmth in my chest
for only an empty shell is the remain...

Rain of needles, wash away this sorrow
let my tears flow down along with the blood.
This agonizing sensation
this unbearable hurt
let it all create a flood...

Such energy draining emotion
i cannot stand any longer....
rain of needles pierce through me...
and be my key to my departure...
♠ ♠ ♠
my type of poetry seems dark... i don't know how the ratings go so i chose R? heh