The Way She Feels

Original:
You left her a crumpled mess on the floor
Crying and Smiling
She still wanted more
Bleeding and Breaking
She says shes fine
Hurting and burning
Shes running out of time
Sighing and Dying
She wishes it to end
Falling and Crashing
There is nothing left to mend

Version 2:
You left her a crumpled mess on the floor
She still wanted more
She says shes fine
Shes running out of time
She wishes it to end
There is nothing left to mend

She is smiling.
She is crying.
She is bleeding.
She is breaking.
She is sighing.
She is dying.
She is falling.
She is crashing.