Rainfall

Every step you take,
I give a little of my soul away
With the raindrops cascading around us,
I thought being with you was worth the pain
Never underestimate, never overcompensate
That's what I told myself once
But I let my walls come down

(Chorus)
I thought I had you
And I believed every word you said
Every word from your mouth had not been true
I should've seen this coming from a mile away
But I guess I'm just so damn stupid
Letting your lies, letting your lies,
Come down on me like rainfall

Standing in the rain,
I weep for you and I just pray
With every fiber of my god damned being,
And tell me it was all worth the pain
Don't fabricate, don't complicate
Just come into my life again
But you think it's already over

(Chorus II)

Last night I dreamed about you
I don't want to live without you
And after all those lies
I still forgive you
Baby, come back, come back
Please come back

(Chorus III)
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This is the first time I have shared something so personal on the internet. Pls don't judge too harshly this is something v.personal for me.

is this good? is this horrendous? should I never write songs again?