Sweet Boy Has Gone Obscene

something is wrong with it but cant figure it out

this is tad bit erotic so yeaah

Stared into plasmatics age
lost between low life alleys
he drifted decadently flowing sikc through jazz poetry

licked by androgynous demons
he moaned drugged by erotic withdrawls
high in the touch of libertarian cum
he is lust in the memory of rebellions dawn
yet his will is to be fucked by revolution's tongue
deadly kissed in name of chaos

but he comes to someone elses cock
for heroin his one truth love
Screwed defeat for brown dust
panting half dead into corporative mouths
he was told to "open up"
suit men trusting into his hole

tomorrow tomorrow maybe
if he can stay away from mislead veins
orgasm for the queen
sweet boy has gone addictly obscene