I like the idea of a sequel. This whole story was written in a very interesting way and I enjoyed it. What the sequel could do, I haven't the slightest idea. But I hope...
OKAY. So, I finally finished reading :) And to be honest, there are alot of mistakes. Like... alot. And you using words like "prolly" instead of "probably" just kind of seems a bit lazy to me. Anyhow. It's an okay story. It was better at the beginning. Now the writing seems rushed, and story is starting to get unoriginal. I'm not trying to mean, I'm just trying to give you some constuctive criticism.
I'm only on chapter 10 so far, so I will comment again after I'm done. I really like this though. It's a fan-fiction, but it's not like something I've read before. Not yet, anyways. I like Chase's character. She's different, and out there.
I really liked this story, even if i'm not a huge fan of non-frerards. this is awesome. please update soon, i can't believe frank was there! i kind of think he's an ass, even though i secretly want them to get back together, i mean, it IS a frankiero story, isn't it? :]