Head Trauma - Comments

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You're too nice to me. :]

This comment will suck ass.

BUT JESUS CHRIST WOMAN. :cheese:
I was so fucking blown away.
Beyond belief.
Just WOW.

The words, the flow, the irrational, grinding, angry, suppressed feeling to it all.
The imagery, the tension, the anxiety in his narrative.
The whole atmosphere of exhaustion, filth, unease and anger you've created.

I'm dumbstruck. Awed. :omfg:

Oooookay, okay. :O
Tehe. Thank you thank you thank you,
&& I'll try to update soon. :]]

'This topic has been inactive for more than 30 days. Do not post unless you have something important to add'
Wow.
Just amazing.
You write with such raw emotion and your descriptions are flawless.
I both envy and admire you.
This story doesn't deserve to be neglected.
So...update?
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will there be anymore in the future?
Raw, so pain-stakingly blindingly real. It's never candy hearts and flowers with you and i adore that you can see things so soberly and make the grimiest, most depraved, disgusting and heart-breaking things seem beautiful and natural almost.

I love this view-point, although i hope it's not true you make me feel like it might have been and make me want more to devour so greedily.

You do no wrong.

This is so raw.

I don't know. I just love it.
More would be lovely, yes please. =]

Thanks! :]

Well, I like it :]
The emotions are described perfectly <3

Thanks. :]]
This is what I write when I can't get anything else written, I guess.
I'm really glad you guys like it;
it's not my best writing as far as technical stuff goes,
but I kinda like it anyways. x]
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So, how's it feel to be brilliant?
Do tell.

The description are lovely.
The emotions are translated so well.

awesome story. you are a great writer
"I’m standing covered in fake blood with Gerard’s tongue halfway down my throat, convinced that this, by far, is the most realistic picture." <thats a really neat wya to describe something
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Poor Frankie... I would've punched that bitch in the face.

Great update, once again =)

Lo.Yo.

WOW! that's really good! i hope you continue!

doll face.:

carcinogenic.:

CAAARYS.
You're too nice to me. :]]

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No more than you deserve, love. :]

NOW UPDATE HEADLIGHTS please.

Pshhhh. Uh huh. :]]

...
I updated the day before yesterday,
&& I've got another one on the way.
I'm finally being productive. XD
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carcinogenic.:

CAAARYS.
You're too nice to me. :]]

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No more than you deserve, love. :]

Major Edit: NOW UPDATE HEADLIGHTS AGAIN please.
[I'd already read the other one, I'm just being demanding. ;]]

Thank you guys more than anything.
I love all of you.&#9829;

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doll face.:

I think I just had a literogasm.

As usual; amaaazing. Beautiful imagery. Makes me want to die. You know, the usual stuff.&#9829; &#9829; &#9829; &#9829;

CAAARYS.
You're too nice to me. :]]

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I think I just had a literogasm.

As usual; amaaazing. Beautiful imagery. Makes me want to die. You know, the usual stuff.&#9829; &#9829; &#9829; &#9829;

Do I even need to say it anymore?
That was amazing.
I can't wait for the next chapter..
I hope Frankie feels more alive.

carniwhore;;:

It explained their past situations almost perfectly [haha, i'd be surprised if the sleeping around was true though XD].

XDD Me too.

But thank you,
&& everyone else. :]]

ILY ALL.
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I seriously loved that.

It explained their past situations almost perfectly [haha, i'd be surprised if the sleeping around was true though XD]. Your writing is so detailed, all your stories are so perfectly described =]]]

great one-shot! once again =P <3333333333333