Hearts Burst Into Fire - Comments

  • pawnsinplay

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    That's exactly how I imagined Paul, too; kind, fun-loving, and a voice of reason. Loved this chapter.
    April 5th, 2016 at 10:37pm
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    This chapter with all the girls was so cute. I love their friendship.
    April 5th, 2016 at 05:07am
  • Pensgirl6687

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    Love it! But I'm torn, I want Rose and Corey to get back together but at the same time I don't!
    April 4th, 2016 at 10:12pm
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    Scarlet is adorable <3 Even though Corey was a huge jerk a big part of me wants him and Rose back together... She is class act and he needs someone like that. Can't wait to read more!
    April 1st, 2016 at 06:15am
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    Scarlet is so cute!
    April 1st, 2016 at 05:15am
  • HeavensNewAngel

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    @ brandyo123
    Thank you. I'm trying to make it so you can see from each characters side, so I'm glad you like it.

    @ pawnsinplay
    I'm excited and hope everyone likes the direction I take some of the characters

    @ amylynn8907
    Thanks for the comment and I promise to update soon.
    March 31st, 2016 at 04:47am
  • brandyo123

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    Your story is amazing! I have been reading for a while but never commented. So many emotions going on at one time. I love Corey, but I kind of want to punch him. Ruby is a giant asshole, but then I also feel sorry for her? Crazy mix going on, haha. Looking forward to reading more!
    March 30th, 2016 at 06:18am
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    One second I wanted to yank Ruby around by her hair, and the next second I actually kind of felt sorry for her. But just for a moment, then I remembered what an arse she is lol. I am surprised that she's letting Rosalie raise her daughter though. It's a good thing, all children need and deserve love, but I can't help feeling like this might bite them all in the butts later on. I loved these chapters! And I can't wait to see what you've got planned for everyone Smile
    March 28th, 2016 at 06:36am
  • amylynn8907

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    i love this! its so different and written very well Very Happy cant wait for your next update
    March 27th, 2016 at 03:25am
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    @ A7X_Lover13
    Thank you for the love. I'm so excited that you like it.

    @ green2envy
    Rosalie is def a inspiration because I know I would be beating some tail also lol. Thanks for the love.

    @ Pensgirl6687
    Thanks again for the love girl. You rock
    March 27th, 2016 at 03:11am
  • A7X_Lover13

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    Great chapter!! So excited to see what's to come
    March 26th, 2016 at 11:57pm
  • green2envy

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    I would have beat ruby up but Rosalie is such a strong woman and can't wait to read what happens next! So excited.
    March 25th, 2016 at 03:08pm
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    Amazing update. Rose is such an amazing and strong woman. Can't wait for more
    March 25th, 2016 at 05:16am
  • Pensgirl6687

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    I would be fuming! I can't wait to see what happens!
    March 24th, 2016 at 09:48pm
  • pawnsinplay

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    TAKE THAT MICHELLE.

    I'm so glad she made it to the wedding. I knew she would, but still. And I also feel like I know what's going to happen but I'm gonna keep that to myself...Wink
    March 23rd, 2016 at 03:50am
  • Pensgirl6687

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    I think she should try to move on but I'm betting Corey is going to do a complete 180 and turn into the man Rosalie had thought he was, check in to rehab and what not...
    March 22nd, 2016 at 08:00pm
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    Oh my god that child. He broke my whole heart.
    March 18th, 2016 at 12:36am
  • Pensgirl6687

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    Omg! My eyes are like waterfalls right now!!! I really hope her and Corey get back together! Not right now, but soon!
    March 17th, 2016 at 08:56pm
  • HeavensNewAngel

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    @ Pensgirl6687
    I know right, they've all been pretty shady with Rosalie huh? Thanks for the comment.

    @ wilda73
    More updates soon. Thanks for the comments and love.

    @ pawnsinplay
    Ya know I love ya hahah Thanks for checking it out again babe.
    March 17th, 2016 at 03:33am
  • Pensgirl6687

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    I'm not even sure I want her to forgive any of them, I mean they all kept a pretty big secret from her,,,, if I were her I would have gotten on the first plane out of there haha but I'm in love with this! Don't stop updating!!!
    March 16th, 2016 at 09:15pm