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One Shot for One Shot

'Love is blind.'

And to me, that quote that summarizes this short story.

It's beautifully written with sadness, anger, tenderness, denial and even a little of craziness mixed together.

I loved especially how you describe Pete's and Patrick relationship throught the short time and the roller coster it has been. Not only for Patrick, but for as Pete as well.

I loved, loved the last lines of the story. Because those two little sentences show anybody the extent people are willing to do for love.

In overall, this was a very beautiful and powerful piece of writing. Keep the good work.

That was fucking ahhh-mazing. I don't know how to explain how much that affected me. I'm totally speechless.

Aw. That dream scene reminded me of our roleplay. :]

This was really, really great. I got so scared at the dream part!
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