Aww! How cute! :D I like cats; but, I'd prefer dogs :)) Just saying. :D The part where she is dreaming of her children are also cute and kinda gave me a hint about what will the ending be. :)))
Whoo! Ahahahahahahahahahashdoasgfyuofg!!!! >:D I was riiiight! :) I honestly think that this is my favorite chapter so far. Didn't expect that dream. Lol.
You're doing a fine job. :D I actually thought that you would stop the story at their wedding or something and then just add a "They lived happily ever after" in the end. :)) But, I was wrong. Keep on writing, add more twists and turns. It will keep people hanging. :D
You're doing a fine job. :D I actually thought that you would stop the story at their wedding or something and then just add a "They lived happily ever after" in the end. :)) But, I was wrong. Keep on writing, add more twists and turns. It will keep people hanging. :D
I have only read the first chapter of this and am already hooked. The plot held my attention (definitely nothing that I've seen before) and Elly is just so adorable. :) I plan to finish reading this, but I suggest it's in my best interest to read the prequel first? Good job! :) I will be watching this story.
Yesss!! Another update! Thank you so much for noticing and replying to my comment on your profile! :D So happy that you have updated. :D I don't care even if it's short. I'm just happy that you were able to update. :D :) Hopefully, Elliece makes the right decision to accept Loki. :) Keep on writing. :) I'll keep on reading and commenting. :D
Oh gosh! I didn't even remember already having read this chapter until I saw that I had already commented on it. Have you gotten busy? I'd really like to see an update, but I know pretty well how busy life can get.
Sorry I haven't been around for a while. I've gotten pretty busy and just got back to getting online. Nice update! I hope to see you writing more soon.
Ah yay an update! Good and it isn't done with! I was really cheering when she killed Nathan he was kind of weird just popping up all the time. Now to see Loki's fate...
Wow. It's been a long time since the last update! :D I nearly thought that you're gonna leave us here hanging. Guess you're just really busy. :) It was shocking that Elliece killed Nathan without any hesitation! :)) Whooo! Go, girl! Anyway, Hope that Loki will be fine. :))
Ooo cliffhanger! I just found your story tonight and started reading it. Good work! I can't wait to know who pulled the trigger! I'm with crazyhazie, I hope this isn't going to be the end.