Shoebox Full of Wooden Letters - Comments

Okay that was seriously one of the cutest things I've read, oh man. :D Good job!

Aw, that was super cute! Very original too :)

This was AMAZING. :D
My friend sent this to me and I totally wasn't expecting Kyle & Oli!
I LOVE IT. :)

*loved

loed it

awwwwwwwwwwws!!!!!! that was sooooo kawaii!! hehehe. i wanna play scrabble now..

AWEE :D
I LOVE IT!
YOU SHOULD MAKE IT MORE THEN A ONE-SHOT

excellcior! :D
sheer bliss!
i love it!
it's so cute. [:
this makes me want to play scrabble like that from now on! :DDD

Shelby, i love you so so so much. this was amazing. i love it.
and i'll talk to my mom about new years after christmas, she'll be less... crazy then.

i love you. xoxoxo

Well, I loved it.
and I know Taylor is gonna love it too..
=]

"Kyle began drawing more letters, and I started to lay down the biggest secret I had all jumbled up inside of me.

i-l-o-v-e-y-o-u

I placed all the letters down then looked at Kyle who was staring at them.

It was silence which was what I was worried about. Carefully I stood up off the floor walking away from the coffee table. I’d just made a huge fool of myself in front of Kyle. As I walked away a few tears started forming in my eyes as I heard a little bit of rustling in that shoebox. Hundreds of wooden letters hitting against each other. What in the world was he looking for.

“Oliver!” Kyle called.

I stopped blinking back more tears. “What?”

“Please come here,” he said softly.

I began walking back. “What Kyle? I just screwed up what?”

Kyle shook his head. “Look,” he muttered pointing to where I’d put down I love you.

I gasped at what Kyle had decided to add.

i-l-o-v-e-y-o-u-t-o-o."

That part, I was literally filled with butterflies in my stomach. This is one of the best written pieces I have came across. It's absolutely, wow. :cheese: It made me feel all and gooey. Haha. Amazing. :cute:

ok i think that was probably the cutest thing in the world. i loved it. :)

awwz!! this is so sweet, i luv it

Aw that was awesome, your a very talented writer.