My Immortal - Comments

:) great update!
let the shoot..BEGIN >=D!

Hey this is really good! But i was wondering if Jo is based on you?

MLE

sorry, i have horrible memory. lmao. loved the update. more soon? :D

awesome update poor jimmy he can't tell any one

The V stands for Vengeance........doesn't it!

Okay so that was random but i really do love the update.
I hope Jimmbo doesn't get into TO much trubble.

Kinky photoshoot eh?
I like the sound of that one :)

i knew she didn't die!!!! that's why she wanted a closed casket ceremony!!! is matt the father? of coarse he is, she only slept with him!!! anywho, more soon?

Awesome update.
And don't worry you didn't give to much away. I just thought about everything....i'm usally good at figureing stuff out...or guessing right!

More soon?

oh the suspense. can't wait for more

I knew it was Jo and i knew she had Zackys kid and thats what the test said and thats why she left and pretended to die....
Or maybe i made all of that up hahahaha.

And awesome, two in such a short time. I soo cant wait for more!

OMG she had a kid.
awesome update keep it coming

dun dun daaaaa !
next :)

good chapter,biatch!
can't wait for more :)

Probably one of the best gifts i got today!

and i have to say, i think its Jo....just cause i cant let Jo go (hahah that rhymed)

more more more

Dun dun dun.
And it begins :)

Adie Vixen:

Damn you for not giving anything away but that was an awesome start!
I can already tell this one is going to be as kick ass as the last two parts!

yeah what she said! lmao. i really like where you're going with it! more soon?

Damn you for not giving anything away but that was an awesome start!
I can already tell this one is going to be as kick ass as the last two parts!

Good beginning :) Can't wait for more.

awesome intro. poor zacky