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*takes deep breath....

bawls like a baby*

wow... i ALMOST cried. almost. if you would have stuck their gravestones in there, i would have been bawling. gravesones always get me.

anyway... wow. i absolutly LOVED this. you need to write a book cheri. publist it and send it across the universe.

wow
that was amazing...
it really was. I loved it.

However, the POV I had to constantly go back to the summary to see whos POV it was.

but besides that, I was in awe with it. I don't think that I have ever read something like that.
good job!

HOLYEFFINGSHIT!
Yes, I am crying now, thanks!
I have been for a while.
This was beautifully written though, brilliant.
The whole idea of the story was amazing, and it make it so much more realistic that there was a talented author like you here to write the idea out.
It was amazing, you had me crying from almost the very beginning.
You have the ability to be able to make someone feel any emotion you want them to, almost like we are a dummy and you are the ventriloquist.
It's crazy how you can do that, but you can.
There's no doubt in my mind that you can.
You have given me a perspective on something that was so amazing, it has inspired me to look differently now, the way you captured each and every one of their emotions and conveyed them with perfection is just incredible.
This is one of my favorites of your stories no doubt, it was amazing, and no matter how many times I tell you that, i feel like you need to hear it again.

Rae

HOLY SHIT THIS IS A GREAT STORY I CRIED!!!

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Srry

You made me cry, Horsie. Grrrr...

You own the world, my friend. I have half a mind to print out every single one of your stories and make a book of them so that I can read them over and over. I fucking love them, and I fucking love you. Don't you DARE stop writing. Ever.

xoxo

Wow. Wow. This story was amazing. Just amazing. And so sad. I cyred a few times. But, it was happy also. Just wow.

This story is really, really deep. Also powerful. I just love it. :) :) :)

WAT THE FUCK Y DID U KILL THEM!!!! *falls to ground sobbing uncontrolably* IM ACTUALLY FUCKING CRYING!!!!! OMG MY GOD!!! Y DID U KILL BOB AND GERARD AND FRANK!!!! Y!!!! Y DID U MAKE THE SMALL FOOD POISION AND MAKE IT INTO A DEATH SENTENCE Y!!!!!!????????????????? *starts shaking uncontrolably and sibs rivers*

wow this is a powerful story its awesome!!!

I was just gonna read a few chapters... Really... 'Speshly when I saw how many chapters there were. I figured it was a bit much to read in one go. I mean, it's tea-time, I'm hungry. I thought "I'll just read the first few chapters and then I'll go eat."

But, NO. You had to go and make it so 'ohmygeesittheedgeofyourseatwhatthehellisgonnahappenpleaaassedon'tletthemdie!omgyouletthemdie!' that I couldn't stop reading and I actually ended up bawling instead.

And I love you for it.
<3.

Pfft.

wow....
this was an amazing story.
i'm kind of sorry it's over.
but why did more then 1/2 the band die?
...though it IS fun killing off characters... i can never bring myself to kill the members of MCR.... idk why....
but still... amazing story.

once again.. I LOVED IT...
you have the same sick urge of having them dead, lol, and i love you for that.
can i be your groupie!?!?! LOL
and the song... ive always loved that song, it used to make me cry when i was in highschool, and now you gave me another good reason to love it.

se you

ohhhhhhhhhhh this is truly amazing. scary yet amazing. I love the end - so powerful.

Wow, that was a great ending. Have I ever told you I love your writing? This isn't a good story to read when you're depressed. But it's still a very good story XD with wonderful songs ;D

what? *tears* i love this story...ill miss it too...ill read the other now..

AGM:

oh my god did i just see throws 2 words.... the end
OH MY GOD!!!!!
ARGH!!!! im gonna miss that story so much!

yup...

AMAZING.--and that's all I have left to say.

oh my god did i just see throws 2 words.... the end
OH MY GOD!!!!!
ARGH!!!! im gonna miss that story so much!

this story is amazing tbh

i think that Mikey should have joined them

why did they end up on the moon ??

but otherwise mindblowing

it made me cry

perfectlyximperfect:

horsie890:

perfectlyximperfect:

FFUUCCKK!!! You didnt not just kill Frank too? omg! *cries so hard can't see what she's typing* WHY?!

'Cause it's fun.

...

Don't look at me like that.

...

Please put away the flamthrower.

that is sooo not fun!!!
its sucks the way mikey had to find out..he's going insane now...
ive never cried like this reading a story thats not true..what are you doing to me??

Yeah, Mikey found out in a really sad way. I actually cried while reading this. And that hardly ever happens.

I love the last chapter. The song was perfect.