La Nocturne - Comments

Hi. I'm currently on the fourth chapter of this story and your writing is just... I'm speechless. The idea, the wording, your characters, it's pure genius. I pretty much fell in love with the layout and everything is just absolutely flawless.
I also read your profile (forgive me for my stalkerish habits) and I just wanted to say please, please don't delete your account! I'm sure it feels like that now, but I think it takes time for readers to approach your stories. Please continue with this. I'm sure that it'll receive the attention that it deserves soon. In my opinion it is by far one of the best written stories I have ever read on Mibba. I'm off to read the rest of this amazing story and I probably won't sleep until I've finished it. Imediate subscribe from me!

Oh. My. Gosh! I can't believe my subscription for this totally didn't work for SIX CHAPTERS!!!! I'm just gonna unsubscribe then subscribe again, and hopefully that'll work. I've finally caught up and everything is so amazing! I was grinning when the seven league boots made their entrance.=D

This is an absolute rarity on this site, and I do hope you continue to write it. The fantasy element is just beautiful, on top of the gorgeous setting and intriguing characters. I just adore Elaine; she is so unlike the heroines you read about nowadays. She has her own voice, her own unique style. The whole story has this beautiful air of mystery to it, a feeling of unpredictability. The writing of this is just breathtakingly gorgeous; it's whimsical and flows beautifully. It honestly reads like a novel. In fact, I'd go as far to say as it's better than anything I've picked up in a bookstore recently (excepting classics, of course).

I agree with every previous commenter, this story should be read and treasured by everyone.

oh no, poor aria
hope you update soon

your story is freaking amazing

I love all of these new characters like the queen or the lord or the faun

oh goodness elaine actually did it!!!
I'm so excited for what happens next
I wonder how josph and aria will feel about this

oh ijust absolutely love this I hope you now can update more its so amazing

Once I read the word 'faeries' I instinctively thought of my favorite book The Two Princesses of Bamarre. Now thinking about it, this story kind of reminds me of it. Two sisters, one is dead or dying, the younger sister that thinks she's the weaker one goes on an adventure, and when the younger sister thinks she finds the cure she finds out that the sister she's trying to save gets turned into a faerie. It's an awesome book. And this story is getting pretty interesting. =]

ohmgee!!

faeries??
i need to know more.
pretty please update soon? (:

<3!

that was amazing!!!
hope you update some more soon!!! lol
ooo fairies? how exciting!!!!
i'm hooked onto your story!

Omg, la nocturne est un triomphe! Mademoiselle, j'adore! i love how you actually know that they didn't wear one fabric, but that they wore things like satin and wool, not cotton, and it's masterfully written as well. i'd be reading on, but i must sleep. ciao till then!

i love your story!!! im excited to see what happens when they bring Aria back!!!!
and i love your style, at some points its very beauitful and poetic!

update soon!!
i wanna see how the 'new' Aria is like. (:

<3!

Such a fantastic story!
You are an amazing writer, it's just... stunning.

Please update soon! [:

I think it should be for you to surprise us with. It is your story after-all. But, thank you for the update :D I love your story

You are a fabulous writer! Good luck with your next chapter!!! ^_^

x___x Updaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaate. {zombie}
Gah, why does all of your writing have to be so... so... there aren't even words. Lovely, heart-wrenching, awesomatastic.

You should totally update. Right as soon as I got to the part about her skimming through that book and reading about the lady who was into necromancy...

The plot just sort of hit me. Or maybe not-so-plot. I can only tell you that when I read it, my mind automatically added it together. Dead sister + Plus Possible Necromancer = Quest to Find Woman and Bring Sister Back to Life. :]

But enough with my nonsensical rambling. Love it and keep up the good work. <3

oooh.
i wonder what the necklace symbolises.
maybe she can like time travel?
that dude is a special one alrights. (:

ahh, so she has been caught. When she realized that he called her 'lady' I actually had to go check to see if he did that. I love the twist of the necklace, and the moment of thinking Bramble was more than a young man.
I personally love it when you update. Your story is one of the few well-written storys that I actually know the name of and like.

Thank you, again, for updating, keep it up (: