Lament - Comments

Oh my God. There is not a word that can describe what I'm feeling right now. It's done, I can't believe it. Congratulations, Emily, you've finished yet another of my favorite stories. You're a great writer with so much talent, never waste it. Bravo.

There simply aren't words. Brava.

This was a really lovely story, and I'm a little sad it's over :')
But! Thank for continuing it until the end and not deleting it.

a lovely ending. x]]
i'm going to miss this story but it had to end sometime right?

Great ending! Loved it.

:)
Congratulations on finishing such en epic story. At first I thought the wedding was Faerie and Alphonse's but I was pleasantly surprised to find out it was Wren. Haha and to think she was wearing white and pink... The entire epilogue I was grinning like an idiot. Especially with the scene with Jason and Victoria. I loved that part.

So good job. And I am SO excited for whatever you have to write next.

Oh, I forgot one thing, heh.
I thought it was cute that Jason and Victoria fancy each other :)
They'll make a good couple.

Okay first thing's first: -sobs- It's over, I can't believe it!
Now that I got that part over... This ended amazingly. I absolutely love how it ended. Faerie and Alphonse (YES!!! :D), Wren and Jules, and even Prince found someone.
The death of Lily was tragic and I was truly shocked when I found out she was helping Charles, but you redeemed her. Great job :)
I will miss these characters immensely, but I can always go back and reread.
Great job with the story. :)

HOLY FRICKEN MAGOOLICAL BALLS!!!!
That is probably some of the best stories i've read EVER i'm serious about that. You should get them published. out into the world. made into movies!!!!
Also i want you to go on to you tube and find a video of people just clapping and cheering and play it for yourself as words aren't very good at applauses.
But i'm giving you one now
Well done ^_^

Absolutely, brilliantly AMAZING!!!!!!!

"And I'm am a murderer. I can kill you without even touching you," he spat.- awesome quoatage right there. That chapter was by FAR the best you've written so far. So powerful and awesome!!
The awesomeocity scale has just been broken by you YET AGAIN... i need to buy a stronger one next time ¬.¬
you might want to take the "I'm " out though. But other than that... COMPLETELY AND UTTERLY KICK BUTTAGE!!!
well done ^_^

wow. i was not expecting that twist.

GASP.
That was so... exhilarating.
Wow. What a great ending! Wow!
I can't believe only an epilogue left. After that... Alphonse and Faerie and Wren and Prince and Jason and everyone else will be gone :(
That's so sad. I'm going to miss them so much!
I'm excited for the epilogue though. :D
Can't waitttt.

oh no! I'm just waiting for Alphonse to come riding on a magnificent steed and save Faerie! aww that would be sweet. I can't believe only one chapter and an epilogue to go. I shall have to have a celebration of some sort to celebrate your immense writing talent of these two stories. So close your eyes and make-believe a thundering applause is sounding just for you ^_^

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEKKK.
:panicked look:
I can't believe this is going to end soon. I love the update, this is amazing. <3

oh lords.
the suspense!
have i ever told you how much i love this story?
because i do. i love it.
i'm so incredibly excited for the update. i cannot believe it is ending.
and i cannot believe that the trilogy is already two thirds of the way through.
SO AMAZING.

intenseness.

Oh. My. Gosh.
O_O
I thought Faerie and Wren were making progress! But...obviously not.
And wouldn't Jules have told Wren about his non-engagement? Oh dear...
And Prince!
You have to update soon, you just have to.
I can't bear the wait. (And wow, do I sound British or what? xP)
I love this. Update soon, please. :)

I agree with the comment above me. Emily, je t'aime and your stories as well :)

Okay, this story is amazing.
I'll admit, I was a bit... weird about Faerie and Alphonse sharing a half-brother, but it's all good now, haha.
I'm going to be incredibly sad when this story is over. Seriously.
It's such a beautiful story and you're an amazing writer. I hope this story ends with a neat little bow :)