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  • noski

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    i loved soliloquy and i'm sure i'll love lament too. i've just finished the prologue, and i've just subscribed.

    :)
    December 11th, 2009 at 12:32am
  • s f

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    Two more chapters? :( I love this story so much! I don't want it to end and at the same time I do. By God, you're amazing.
    December 6th, 2009 at 04:47am
  • silvertongue

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    JASON?! I mean, really, WHAT THE CRAP?!
    that was the best twist ever.
    and I hope you know that I am going to cry my eyes out when this is all over. only two more chapters left :(
    December 5th, 2009 at 05:41pm
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    No! Only two more chapters? That makes me sad. I hope this has a happy ending.
    December 5th, 2009 at 01:56pm
  • twinkle.toes

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    This story is AMAZING.
    You are a most wonderful writer, I love all of your works(:

    Please keep up the great work.
    December 5th, 2009 at 01:32am
  • Childhood;;

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    Two chapters? My jeez, I'm going to miss the excitement I get from seeing an update from you. (:
    December 4th, 2009 at 11:11pm
  • greatbigbagofd1cks

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    i love this story so much.
    x]]
    December 4th, 2009 at 09:46pm
  • AngelOfBlood

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    Oh no! Only two chapters and an epilogue!? WHYYY!!!!!
    That was a good chapter. Got particularly steamy at some points, which was awesome considering all they were doing was making out and you made it sound like that which shows your excellent writing skill. kudos to you
    December 4th, 2009 at 03:18pm
  • eastxcoastxenvy

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    Holy crap.

    I'm pretty bummed out that there aren't going to be more chapters, but I'm so excited to see how things work out.

    Your plot twists are always so fantastic. I really greatly admire your writing ability.

    Please tell me that you're going to have another story to start writing right after Lament?
    December 4th, 2009 at 10:54am
  • silvertongue

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    the craziest cliffhanger, ever.
    i need this story like i need breathing
    December 3rd, 2009 at 11:45pm
  • riellybabie101

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    Loved it.
    December 3rd, 2009 at 04:58pm
  • YouMakeMeGiggle62

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    AHHH!!!! i need to know!!!! way to leave me hanging... gees : ) i want to understand! i'm not going to lie, the beginning was a tad cheesy, just so you know, but it doesn't make you any less of a wonderful writer : D
    December 3rd, 2009 at 05:51am
  • andrea.howls

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    this is getting intense
    I am so excited!
    December 3rd, 2009 at 01:45am
  • s f

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    BY GOD, you're killing me. The updates have been amazing, but now I'm standing at the edge of a cliff without knowing what's gonna happen. Please, update soon!
    December 3rd, 2009 at 01:02am
  • greatbigbagofd1cks

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    cliff hangers are not cool.
    December 2nd, 2009 at 10:32pm
  • Childhood;;

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    You did NOT just leave us hanging like that. Haha, I'm standing on my toes right now. Hope to see an update soon. You did an awesome job with the update. <3
    December 2nd, 2009 at 10:11pm
  • AngelOfBlood

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    OMFG why do i get the feeling that it is actually Charles Wainwright?
    AND OMFFG i hope i'm wrong lol
    woo for the return of Prince and Faerie and Alphonse almost doing it on the bed XD
    December 2nd, 2009 at 03:52pm
  • starburned

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    Emily, you are just killing me with those cliffhangers. Please update soon!

    About the chapter - it was awesome. Just when you think one thing's settled (in the most tentative way possible), just when Alphonse and Faerie finally, FINALLY get together, out comes Jaedo telling her she's going to be the fairy queen! I love it, I love it I love it I love it. You never see it coming :)
    December 2nd, 2009 at 05:49am
  • HopefulRissa

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    Honestly, this story never ceases to amaze me with its eloquence and cleverness. Sometimes I'm dumbfounded that it's even on Mibba.
    Find an agent. Get published.
    It's totally possible.

    Also, the return of Prince was fabulous. I was so happy.
    December 2nd, 2009 at 05:42am
  • eastxcoastxenvy

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    You updated again! Yay. That made my day!
    December 2nd, 2009 at 05:34am