Just Want Your Heartbeat on Top of Mine - Comments

Ohoh :)
i lvoe this story too ;D well good :D

WOOOOOOOO

we love each other high five haha ;D :P
Woo i love this ;D Have fun at bring me i love that band live ;D

ooh yay me(:
BUT OMGGGGG
i read the first update of today and no joke i was like "OMGOMGOMG"
but omg, again haha, you mustmustmust update soon because i am 100% in love with this story and oli and katy love each other(i said so) so i need to read more of this.
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ohh yayaya, this is so cute. krista is a future teller

Lol Im a drunken bitch =] Jack and Vodka are the shit. And you totally got it right; when everyone is panicking, I stay calm as fuck, I just cant bring myself to worry over something, I just think logically, heartless whore :O ! Ill stop commenting, its the fourth one in mere minutes haha xD I love you dude, you're amazing.

Oh ! I forgot, Im totally subscribing, Tom is way cuter, Tom is amazing, have you seen those fucking blue eyes of him ? D A Z Z L E ♥ Oh no ! I hate pair hours, I always see them ! Like 11:11, 13:13, she cant die mate =O ! Not at that crappy hour anyways :O !

Ouh ! Im Lee's sister, I just love Lee ! He is so sweet, when I met him, I gave him suck a big hug, Im sure he had trouble breathing, but hey, I love him =D !

Wosh Im suck a bitch O.o I hadnt see this before, thats why I hadnt commented love, this is amazing. Im sucky besides you, your grammar is just fucking awesome. The story line is original, I want you to update ASAP missy !

aw thank you. tom's cuter, but i love david as well.
but why did she die, it's so sad. and at 11:11? poor oli didn't get out what he wanted

that was sad
and Toms cuter (:

Woah you did a lot. <3_<3

Oh, and Tom Sykes. =]

I love this story.

Woo :D
i love you too for writing this story :D:P
I cant wait for the next one :D WOO :D:P

'he was a good ole’ chump'
that made me smile :)
more maybe?
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Gah I love this story :)
MORE UPDATES!

are you kidding?
omg!
you HAVE to update ASAP!
i just read this story tonight and i subscribed and it's SOOOOOO amazingly good and i'm going to legit freak out if you don't update soon!
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I'm SO sorry!
I subscribed, but never commented. I know a lot of writers hate that, right?
Well, I'm commenting now so.... yay? haha
Starting from the begining, Oli is a dick, David is hot and he and Katy should have stayed together, Michelle (I got her name right? I'm horrible at remembering names) is pretty cool I like her, KATY BETTER BE OKAY, and.... Curtis is cute.
Okay last one really had nothing to do with anything but whatever, it's a fact xd

OMG NO, poor katy. seriously those lyrics are gonna be the ~death of us all, no pun intended.

you should post the next one really soon
cause i want to know what happens (:
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Im the third subscriber i think ?:P i loves this :D

its awesome more more :D hehe

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can't wait for the rest of this
it's so good.