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  • Baile Funk

    Baile Funk (100)

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    -double post-
    But the last two lines too, a very good evaluation of the topic the one-shot talks about: "show us both our love and hate in all their harsh and beautiful glory, a thousand fold?"
    February 21st, 2009 at 11:40pm
  • Baile Funk

    Baile Funk (100)

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    "splintered into millions of tiny silver shards which I shall use time and time again to scar myself, to cut away the pain caused by both the breaking of that mirror and my heart, to cut away the hurt I feel now that you are gone"

    I love the way that the mirror turns from a thing that the people in the relationship can look at and admire themselves in, to the object that causes one of the written persona's to harm them self with, it's a very clever and beautiful play on the mirror representing the relationship and how it shows the happier and darker sides.
    February 21st, 2009 at 11:40pm
  • Light In The Tunnel

    Light In The Tunnel (100)

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    Short but good! I like it!
    February 18th, 2009 at 02:13pm