...And It Swallowed Me Whole - Comments

"A short story, inspired by my pal Kelly whose mother thinks that she is too absorbed in writing stories..."

Yeah, I kind of wish I was still absorbed in writing stories. =/

By the way, I'm going to probably start commenting on all your stories again just because I'm really bored and you're not updating any of them.

I just had Heidi read it. She said I was silly 'cause I inspired it. XD And when she was reading it she said, "Does her dad really give her coffee like that?" Haha.

Haha! I love it! I didn't expect it to end like that. Haha. You're silly, Chelsea. But I really like it. Short stories are fun to write, aren't they?
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This is really good, I really enjoyed it.