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  • pjrox

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    Love it -- especially when she's trying to explain her & Zackys situation.

    I feel like there's a twist & we haven't heard the last of Slade, or I could be possibly wrog.
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    December 14th, 2011 at 01:42pm
  • zackyvravageme

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    Oh. my. gosh. I'm so happy Toni brought her home! And the way Slade died was just epic! loved the update. Can't wait to read more <3
    December 14th, 2011 at 06:10am
  • ThePast_IsReal

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    Umm Yea I love it!
    December 14th, 2011 at 03:02am
  • DaniSayWhat?

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    Emma DeWitt = my new hero for being awesome!
    New kid in the house? Very interesting things to come and I can't wait to read theeeeem!!

    <3
    December 14th, 2011 at 01:16am
  • avenging angel

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    Oh my god!!! She did it!!! I'm happy but very exicted wondering how zacky is gonna react! :0!loved the update!!!!! Plz write more soon!!!:)
    December 13th, 2011 at 11:58pm
  • zackyvravageme

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    SoI was in the car with my mom and brother when I saw you had a new chapter out. One word: emabaressing! I literally screamed yes and did a happy dance. My mom looked at me so crazy, it was hilarious! Anyways, waiting was worth it because I love your chapters. Amazing as always <3 keep writing!
    November 23rd, 2011 at 04:24am
  • efflorescxnt

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    Amazing chapter yet again.
    November 22nd, 2011 at 08:29pm
  • DaniSayWhat?

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    OH MAN! I definitely thought, at the end of the last chapter, that it was gonna be some set up and things were gonna go all ape-shit. But I like how it turned out....and Dina needs to fall in a hole in the street...

    <3
    November 22nd, 2011 at 02:50pm
  • pjrox

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    I loved when Zacky ran back to Toni, saying goodbye with an I love you, instead of being angry. Very cute. Brilliant writing xx
    November 22nd, 2011 at 01:46pm
  • young.

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    your story is AMAZING. please update! :)
    November 22nd, 2011 at 09:58am
  • avenging angel

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    I think Brian convinced zack to rise in the little girl :) I'll be happy of he did. Hopefully nothing. Ad happens when they go to that house Slade is supposedly in. Great update!!!cant wait for more :)
    November 22nd, 2011 at 02:56am
  • efflorescxnt

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    Oh no I feel like something bad is gonna happen.
    November 21st, 2011 at 06:25am
  • kristinvengeance

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    BAD IDEA TONI! oh hell, hurry up!! :D
    October 26th, 2011 at 03:52am
  • trishahhh

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    It's been two days, I found this story and I was not able to put my iPad done, I've been reading this non stop! I love it! Please more soon!
    October 25th, 2011 at 07:46pm
  • pjrox

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    I love this story! Brilliant and long. Definitely worth the wait. xxx
    October 25th, 2011 at 03:11pm
  • zackyvravageme

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    I can't even describe how happy I am now that my favorite Zacky story is back! LOVED the update. Keep writing por favor <3
    October 25th, 2011 at 07:19am
  • LeahVengeance

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    Yeah, I agree this is one of THE best stories around here, it's awesome, I admire Toni for her strenght! I really hope you update more! Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease!
    October 25th, 2011 at 04:42am
  • ThePast_IsReal

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    I get the feeling that nothing good is going to come from her going in there
    October 25th, 2011 at 03:46am
  • DaniSayWhat?

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    ummmmmm.....I feel like her going to the front door alone is a reeeeeaaaaaally bad idea haha

    and now I'm sitting on the edge of my metaphorical seat to find out what's gonna happen...

    <3
    October 25th, 2011 at 03:41am
  • banana sykes.

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    Still one of the best stories on this site!
    October 25th, 2011 at 02:48am
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