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  • scute

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    Damn giiirl, that was steamyyy ;)
    more people need to right about Geno, until them my life is this story hahaha
    June 8th, 2009 at 05:25am
  • mully17

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    loveee it
    June 8th, 2009 at 04:53am
  • damn damn leash.

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    What a cliffhanger!

    And I love Max in this story.
    Srsly.
    June 8th, 2009 at 03:16am
  • lynne1988

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    OH GOD. So close, again! Poor Elodie is probably frustrated as hell! Wow.

    But, I think it's sweet they like eachother and both went to Max for guidance. =)

    Can't wait for moreeee!
    June 8th, 2009 at 03:06am
  • alyssa-anne

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    Whoa baby! That chapter was hottttt. It was, like, a giant make out session. BUT!!! You can't end it there. That's just mean. It was like I was so close. hahahahaha.

    more soon!!
    June 8th, 2009 at 02:56am
  • broken sticks

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    Well damn. Right when they are all hot and bothered too eh? Inconvenient lack of supplies haha.

    It's cute that Geno asked Max for permission in a way to date Elodie. =]

    And clearly by the start of this chapter Geno didn't want to stop when Max knocked on the door too.

    Lastly, I hope that the influence/presence of alcohol doesn't make it like this is something they both regret.

    Lovely update Georgii!
    June 8th, 2009 at 02:56am
  • westcoastwinter

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    Goodness, they just can't catch a break, can they? Haha!

    So, now I'm wondering what they're going to do! I can totally see them running all around town trying to find a place that's open to buy a condom. But, I'm sure you can come up with a much better idea than that =)

    I can't wait for more!!
    June 8th, 2009 at 02:53am
  • scute

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    I loveeee this :)
    update soon, it's sooo good!!!
    June 3rd, 2009 at 02:53pm
  • Kaner92

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    omg this is amazing story!
    having a vision *mad drinking at this party *
    May 30th, 2009 at 03:48am
  • The Walrus

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    I lurve it, Georgii! <3
    May 28th, 2009 at 02:41pm
  • dreamerforever

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    Why did Geno not look at her when he left? What is up with him?
    May 27th, 2009 at 03:30am
  • MollyRhiannan

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    ah WHOAAA!! i wasn't expecting that, but i LOVEDDDD it!!

    update soon! i wanna know what happens!
    May 26th, 2009 at 05:07am
  • mully17

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    Awww so intense love it
    May 26th, 2009 at 03:23am
  • lynne1988

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    AH SEXY GENO TIMESSS! Omg though, what aweful timing on Max's part. If I were Elodie I would be so frustrated! hahaha

    I loveddd it! Update sooooon!
    May 26th, 2009 at 01:03am
  • alyssa-anne

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    Oh my god. He stopped!? Why the hell would he stop? Gah. This is killing me, but hey, I still love it. I wonder what he's reasoning is. I can't wait to see where you go with it.

    && Don't be unsure about the chapter. It was lovely.
    May 26th, 2009 at 12:53am
  • westcoastwinter

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    Oh, Max, and his horrible, horrible timing!

    And, if it was awkward between the two of them after Evgeni moaned her name with another girl, I can just imagine this party!

    I have no idea why you weren't sure about this chapter! I really liked it, and I can't wait to see what happens at the party!
    May 26th, 2009 at 12:39am
  • broken sticks

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    Oh dang. Awkward times ahead! Cause that was pretty intense at the end there and he just stopped. Like it was nothing too. I have a feeling there is going to be some mad drinking at this party. *nods* Oh I think it was adorable that she decided to tell him in Russian. This next part should be good. =)
    May 26th, 2009 at 12:36am
  • damn damn leash.

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    Finallllly, they are together, somewhat.
    I can feel the awkwardness for the next update.

    Nothing to be unsure about, it was good. (:
    Seriously.
    I hope there's more soon!
    May 26th, 2009 at 12:22am
  • dreamerforever

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    Woah...should've seen that coming.
    May 24th, 2009 at 08:18pm
  • broken sticks

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    So fail on my part for reading and then going out and completely forgetting that I didn't comment. My bad! I went for ice cream and watched some fireworks for Victoria Day. Anywho. That was a great chapter -- loads of changes -- yay! Well Max's 'girlfriend' was quite the little player eh? Classy lady right therrre. Tom is a bugger and just needs to piss off. =] Ooooh. Moaned Elodie eh? That shall be a great conversation. I'm looking forward to it. Geno is adorable in this story. Great writing! =D
    May 18th, 2009 at 08:45am