Homepage › Stories › Set on False Pretense › Comments

Set on False Pretense - Comments

  • Tongue Tied Ideas.

    Tongue Tied Ideas. (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    33
    Location:
    France
    OH MY GOD, you had me tearing up at the ending chapters when they were still at their misunderstandings, it was so painful that they're both hurting for something that could have been avoided if they'd just talked, things do really become messed up if people don't talk it over. Damn, this was your first yet it was breathtaking epic. <3
    September 1st, 2011 at 10:55pm
  • poisonedpills

    poisonedpills (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    35
    Location:
    United States
    i love this and i think it's a shame that it didn't get more comments. those two boys were perfect for each other and deserved to be happy together! i'm off to stalk your other stories since i've enjoyed this one so much
    February 24th, 2011 at 05:53am
  • Miyral

    Miyral (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    32
    Location:
    United States
    This has got to be my favorite of yours. I've read it twice now and it still makes me grin like an idiot and completely melt the way it did the first time round. I can't thank you enough for sharing this story with us. Thank You! <3
    December 3rd, 2010 at 06:14pm
  • imperfectlysane

    imperfectlysane (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    Canada
    ...I loved that. That was amazing. Thank you for writing that, it made my day. =}
    November 18th, 2010 at 09:07am
  • Frank_Iero

    Frank_Iero (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    United States
    i know this is over and all but i just read it and i thought it was such a cute story, so i wanted to comment and show my love :D
    August 4th, 2010 at 11:57pm
  • MiniMCR

    MiniMCR (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    27
    Location:
    United States
    ohhh...this is so sweet...
    i LOVE it
    May 15th, 2010 at 02:01am
  • AvengedFanfoREVer

    AvengedFanfoREVer (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    36
    Location:
    United States
    Again, I should say, that you are an amazing writer!! I loved it!!
    January 13th, 2010 at 07:01am
  • rawryourself

    rawryourself (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    United States
    This story's amazing! I love it. You should make a sequal...or something.
    January 11th, 2010 at 01:49am
  • Mercy James

    Mercy James (105)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    Canada
    great story!!
    November 25th, 2009 at 05:51am
  • ilovecolors

    ilovecolors (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    United States
    ohmygosh i LOVE this story!! I had tears in my eyes all throughout chapters 11 to 14 and now my eyes sting because i used my hands to wipe my tears away. Also i didn't do my homework yet (and I probably wont) but who cares! i loved it! <3
    October 20th, 2009 at 04:00am
  • space is for stars.

    space is for stars. (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    27
    Location:
    Canada
    OMG! This was sooooo good. One of the best slashes I've read on here, and I read a lot of them. This story deserves way more than five stars. :D
    September 19th, 2009 at 05:39pm
  • crushesalot14

    crushesalot14 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    32
    Location:
    United States
    stayed up all night reading it, adored it <3 =)
    July 15th, 2009 at 12:07pm
  • Captain Dynamic

    Captain Dynamic (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♂
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    United States
    That was so cute!! It made me cry more than once and I'm very happy to have found it in my inability to sleep. Thank you!!!
    June 29th, 2009 at 08:03am
  • demiixxlovee

    demiixxlovee (150)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    Australia
    That was probably one of the most amazing stories I have ever read. I actually cried. AND I NEVER CRY. EVER!
    Great job.
    June 27th, 2009 at 02:32pm
  • whitewolfe007

    whitewolfe007 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    United States
    I LOVED IT!!! <3 IT WAS FREAKIN AWESOME!!! Clap :D It was one of the best stories I've read in a while anywhere. Keep up the good work!
    June 10th, 2009 at 10:33am
  • frank turner.

    frank turner. (105)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    Great Britain (UK)
    That.
    Was.
    Amazing.
    ifly ;D

    ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
    May 2nd, 2009 at 11:17pm
  • dakota.nightshade

    dakota.nightshade (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    Great Britain (UK)
    so cute.
    i love it.
    sequel?
    pleeeaaasssee?
    x
    April 29th, 2009 at 10:09pm
  • wabadabadaba

    wabadabadaba (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    United States
    awwwww <3 so cuuttteeee!!!!
    only one more? :(
    sad times.
    April 28th, 2009 at 12:32am
  • RachelSaiyuki

    RachelSaiyuki (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    United States
    OMG!!! I LOVE THIS!!
    CHAPTER!!!
    OMG WILL IS CUTIE!!!
    AND CHAd IS A PAINTER!!!!!!!
    I LOVE PAINTERS AND SINGERS!!!
    OMFG!! HE OWN A GALLERY!!!!!!!!!!! LOL
    I LOVE YOU HONEY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    April 27th, 2009 at 01:13pm
  • RachelSaiyuki

    RachelSaiyuki (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    United States
    OMFG! THEY'RE TOGETHER!!1
    WILL IS THE MAN!!!! I LOVED WHAT HE DID AT THE GAME!!
    YES HES GOING TO ARTS!!!
    YAY, HIS DAD IS A-OKAY NOW!!!
    BTW I LOVED THIS CHAPTER VERY MUCH! <333333
    April 24th, 2009 at 04:39am
Homepage › Stories › Set on False Pretense › Comments